Friday: First Draft, I miss your smile

If my first draft were a person, she’d be a lively, fun loving lady.  Editing?  No way.  Audience?  Who cares.  My first draft follows her heart, and changes her mind at a moment’s notice.

The biggest problem with my first draft is her clothes.  Her favorite outfit is a pair of heavy denim overalls on top of a boxy t-shirt with short sleeves that are just too long.  Her dentist would recommend a whitening treatment, but when she smiles, it’s for real.

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~ by Clickity Clack on January 7, 2011.

One Response to “Friday: First Draft, I miss your smile”

  1. Demi Moore in Ghost with yellow teeth?

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